 CommentsDevious Comments Not sure I understand your issue with the composition but it will be the same as the coloured verison I just posted called Crossing the Sands [link]
Thanks for using the critique option mate   -- Everyone has a photographic memory. Some just don't have film  No worries
 The bottom left hand side of the photo just seems a bit too empty, the 100 word minimum makes me ramble on a bit -- "Every portrait that is painted with emotion is a portrait of the artist, not the sitter." -Oscar Wilde yer don't have to use 100 words try 87 it still worcx
-- Everyone has a photographic memory. Some just don't have film oh cool, thanks for letting me know
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If you keep it in black and white i think it could adjust the levels a little to make it look a bit more lively.
The composition is good keeping well with the rule of thirds, but i find the bottom right corner is a bit distracting as it makes the shot feel too bunched up in the top left.
Looks like a great location, ill have to check it out some time.
You did really well despite the horrid weather we've been having up here